Just Landed



Hi

Hi there...my name is Arpita,

I Just landed here on March 10th 9.23 AM..this is a cool place, better than what I thought..I saw my mom, the doctor and a few other people. One guy particularly looked happy and excited..must be my dad..see ya..got to take a bath.


I am told that I cannot have an account myself, they were talking about some 18 years and stuff like that..strange rule you have in this world..anyway, I have convinced my dad to give me some space.

Comments

gee tee naduvil said…
excellent work. keep posting . you have a bright future in the writer's world. plz don't leave it here. here i would like to compliment it with my poem.
YAH ! I LANDED
A gentle kick woke her up
from the sweet waves of her dream
as if i were in a hurry
to see the world and scream
with a tired smile in pain
she laid on the table
pairs of eyes watching on her
making her quite stable
alas! i landed, cried at a pitch
made her heart throb
to see the union of her love
shaped in a body and a nob
flickering waves of emotions
flashed on her in a flip
while feeling the soft fingers
that caught her in tight grip.
those curious sparkling eyes
came to me closer
showering all the warmth
made me secure and dozier
Arpita Nambiar said…
Thanks gee tee. That was a wonderful poem..! Very spontaneous. Keep writing.

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